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« Thread Started on Aug 31, 2008, 9:50pm »

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Mahogany occules searched the terrain unfamiliar to them as crimson painted pillars surged the small bodice forward. Banner danced gracefully following the two-beated motion. Tassel swished at a fly every once in a while. Sweat dripped down her neck and sloping shoulders. Mind raced through past memories. I promise... She had told her, I promise. This was not a promise she was going to break or forget

Not long ago she had been a yearling by her mother's side. Rene had been the last born of all her mother's foals in her lifetime but the downside was, Rene was born when her mother was almost twenty years old. When Rene was a year old, her mother fell ill to a disease and passed away soon after leaving Rene with one small wish. "Rene, please do not hold back on doing anything because of my abscence. Live on, Live Happy." And Rene had Replied, "I Promise..."

As much as she would've liked to mourn for her mother for years more, she knew she just had to keep the promise she made. She was not in her right mind going to disappoint her mother. Pillars soon halted all movement beneath a large tree as they soon collected beneath her and laid her bod onto the sod beneath the tree. She was here to await what would behold for her for the future. And now she would wait as long as needed.

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« Reply #1 on Aug 31, 2008, 11:10pm »

I walked and walked with my tired sweaty pillars searching for a place to rest. I have been wandering for so long that the entire frame of my body was stagnant with the aroma of pain but as usual I would keep on. As i walked with the dripping sound of sweat hitting the lush green ground I walked upon behind me, I could see nothing before me always keeping my head down in shame. I always felt shame my father was a mighty warrior non-could match him in the art of fighting he once told me that "I fight not for the sake of me, but for the sake of the others you are my son I would die for you" As I remembered these words a small tear ran from my eye down the course of my battle cold face, devoid of emotion my expression did not change the only thing that would show my sorrow would be that lone tear. Traveling for so long iced over my once warm heart, my mother died giving birth to me, my father told me she was more beautiful than the sun with a heart of an angel.

It was not long till I lost him to.He died in battle against a cutthroat, a black-hearted thing of a horse his last words were "to stay strong to think before you act and to never ever give up on hope" then as he said that final word it was like signing his soul to the cold clutches of death.

I swore to avenge my father that was why I would hunt his murderer down and bring him to justice by any means ANY MEANS! So with that thought in mind, I kept walking pushing my pillars forward they felt like they were going to break and turn to dust any minute but i didn't care what happened to me i had nothing so what was there to lose. I heard a sound it sounded like my fathers voice like he was there next to me I shook my head saying it was just the wind a breeze in the leaves, remembering the advice my father gave me "Listen to the wind my boy it will always guide you so pick your chin up and listen to the call of the wind, it will never fail you" I shrugged saying fine then dad you always had the right idea to everything so why not, you always were right even though I never understood your mumbo jumbo talk. I raised my head to See what I was to see supposedly, as I raised my head, I saw a beautiful horse. She shined with radiance, her mane glistened with light it actually gave me a little more strength to move. My pillars in tremendous pain with every step I took but I know I could trust her for some reason i have never trusted no one but for some reason I know I could trust her. approached her slowly my muscles about to turn to dust I knew I had to have some form of rest.

May I lay next to you for a moment please I have walked for so long please may I?
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« Reply #2 on Aug 31, 2008, 11:37pm »

Auds pricked at the sound of footsteps coming toward her. Already? She had only been there for maybe a couple hours and a stag was already approaching? Dial turned until gaze set upon his bod. He was a bit larger than her but held the same crimson tinted pinto markings she did. Mahogany occules scanned over him as the sweat shined in the oncoming sunset. There was no light in his orbs possibly from being tired. Auds pricked forward towards him as silence slipped between them only soon broken by the words escaping the stag's labras.

Auds caught the deep lyrics as she gave a gesture that he could lay with her as it was noticeable that he was tired. I promise... The thought ran across her mind once more. Did this stag have real intentions, a real reason why he was here? Why he wanted to lay here? Why was he here? She really couldn't answer it on her own and she didn't really care all that much but the silence tensed the surroundings.

My name is Rene.
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« Reply #3 on Sept 1, 2008, 12:16am »

He stared into her eyes seeing into her very soul asking himself why am I laying next to her. Her beauty should not be next to such tired smelling stag, he felt a kindred spirit in her, maybe that is why she mad me feel like she was so trustworthy I didnt have to worry about her betraying me. Maybe she was a sign to stop my travel of vengence and hatred, I dont know but her breaking the silence meant that I knew I had to speak anyway no matter what. I may be cold, but I am a gentlemen that was the first thing he taught me was to respect the opposite gender.

I......I just didnt know what to say, should I give her my name, did I trust her enough to give her that. For the first time I felt nervous talking to somebody why am I feeling this way to another was it her beauty or was it deeper than that.There is no way i am having feelings for
her already, she doesnt want to be with me anyway, but it seems she is interested in me alittle bit. I am going to take a chance and see what happens then heck what do I have to lose but time and time I have plenty of

My name is Trueblade "True" since i never lie and "Blade" since i am a warrior.Sorry if I have disturbed you I will leave if you want me to.

"I hope she doesnt want me to though"
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« Reply #4 on Sept 1, 2008, 8:18am »

Fore pillars removed themselves from beneath her bodice as talons braced against the sod and she lifted her small frame to stand. There was a constant slight breeze that tugged at the tresses of her banner and tassel. The thought of her last promise never left her mind. Mahogany occules gazed into the distant horizon as she noticed the sun beginning to set. Day was running out and soon they would be barely noticeable, almost ghost-like in the moon light. Tassel swished once to somewhat break what seemed like a statue stance.

After a moment of silence, Rene decided she wa going to need to ask True Bade the question, hoping for it to turn out good. Dial shifted to look at him. He had more musle than she and possibly could easily run a herd. Maybe he would be the stag she ended up with. Rene paused for one more moment before taking in a breathe and releasing her lyrics from her labras.

'Tis nice to meet you True Blade. You seemed very tired when you arrived which is why I've been silent for a while so as you could catch your breathe. May I ask of your reasons and intentions of being here?

I Promise...



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« Reply #5 on Sept 1, 2008, 9:00am »

He stared at her majestic face, her kindness seemed to just pour out. All I could do was wonder what she was thinking right now, I wish I knew.I gazed upon her beauty for a moment I couldnt take my eyes off her, I could only imagine why I was here what a question to ask I did want to seem rude I came here by accident, what was I going to tell her that I am her protector, and have been searching for her all my life. It would be the perfect thing to say but it wouldnt be the truth, and lying to such a beautiful mare would be sin, a stain on my soul and I already had a few of those. I went down a path of pain I couldnt bring her down it as well, I have to find "him", I just dont know is this what you wanted of me father is this your doing its like you knew when I was going to listen to the wind,still controlling my life even in death you old stag, but even though i complained so much you always were there looking out for my best interests.I am not a foal no more I thought to myself. I decided then to open up to her there was no problem in that I could wait for the day me and him saw each other once more, maybe she could tame my heart and defeat the spirit of vengence that lives within me
devouring my very soul.

But should I tell her the truth I want her to speak it is helping me to relax. After alittle bit more silence and thinking i finally some up some courge to speak to her this time I was sweating not from walking for so long but from the nervousness to talk to her.I gazed once more into thoughs beautys known as her eyes.Taking a deep breath with my nstrils storing the air in my lungs for a minute, thinking once more what to say, then I gave it my best shot hoping something could happen between us.

Please such a beauty as you should never be silent, your words give me strength.I have been wondering for a very long time I guess I forgot some of my manners,please forgive me.Thank you for your kindness I have not been shown that in a very long time, I am in your debt.Truth be told I have been traveling in search of someone but I followed the wind to you and the wind has never let me down before,maybe I could just stop my journey for a while you seem so beautiful I wish i could start a herd with mare like you may I lay next to you it would make my bod would feel so much better?

"I hoped that she would see that I was interested in her"
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« Reply #6 on Sept 1, 2008, 3:59pm »

Rene could hardly believe the lyrics that escaped the stag's labras. Did no one truly show him kindness? It really wasn't that hard to do so. It was simple manners. Although maybe they theselves weren't shown any kindness and it it just causes a chain reaction. Ivorine painted pillars flinched as flies landed upon them. The only thing she hated about spring. Flies. Such nuissances they were.

Fore pillars bent as talons dug and lifted herself from the sod in a buck. She couldn't stand the flies anymore and she cantered a bit away and shook herself only to return not long after. I'm sorry for that outburst. Flies bother me so much more than most other horses. Had to get rid of them. Why hasn't anyone shown you any kindness? Also, you seem to be constantly thinking about something. What's wrong? She couldn't help but notice it.
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« Reply #7 on Sept 1, 2008, 4:43pm »

Well thats sucks hopefully the flies were not around because of me I hope I didn't smell that much I thought to myself, but she was right I did have something on my mind that particular moment, I felt strange around her from the moment I saw her it was love at first site I had only heard rumors of such an emotion, though I knew what it was the moment I felt it.
Could.......could she love me back could she feel the same way I do for her I am so confused
I don't know what to say. Right then i decided to tell her what she wanted and to profess my feelings towards her but I froze I have never been in this situation before, darn mouth move speak the words that I must. One lone flie was still alive buzzing around her, it moved from the curves of her back straight to her face.

Here let me get that

I tried to swat at the flie with my face I bet I was making myself look like a total fool in her eyes it finally landed on her nose without think I went for the flie accidentally I nuzzled her.

Oh god I cant believe I did that, my face felt like it was on fire, was I blushing oh I am so embarrassed, stupid Trueblade think before you act oh I am so embarrassed

I......I am a out lander I see other herds every once and a while but they stay clear of me like its not there problem why should they care.I did have something on my mind....................but
don't worry about it its fine.
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